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- Country
- Australia Hong Kong, China India
- Career Field
- Investment Banking
- Major
- Finance
- Salary Range
- $70-80,000 $80-90,000 $90-100,000 $100-125,000 $125-150,000 $150,000+
this occured in the past so make it past tense
Why is being recommeneded an accomplishment? Did you get into the program? If so, that is the accomplishment
remove. you already have the dates for each position
combine sections. Internships are considered work experience
I know these are related to your field of interest, but why would an investment bank care? They are looking for leadership and not what term papers you wrote. How does this differentiate you from other MBA students? They all have to write term papers.
how do you secure a percentile? You Earned or Achieved that percentile?
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First impression: Very tight fit.
Which means that you are trying too hard to fit everything you can think of.
Well you don't need to. You only need to raise interest to the point that you'll be called for an interview.
I'd say that it could be done with that IIMA alone.
And now it's there almost drowning into the text.
Dump some of the irrelevant info out and bold IIMA and all honours connected with it. Then leave white space around it and let it hit to readers mind as his/her first thing to see from this paper.
sorry IIMB of course
Not sure whether you have enough experience for banking associate. Perhaps Big4 or someone with more experience could review that part?
Here are my thoughts. I prefer to keep the formatting to a minimum because so I would remove all of the shading. The current iteration is information overload. Nobody recruiter is going to read all of that. The rest of my thoughts are in the text bubble. Best of luck!