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- Country
- United States France United Kingdom
- Career Field
- Accounting Commercial Banking Consulting Corporate Finance Education Finance Human Resources Investment Banking Insurance Marketing Retail Sales Sales & Trading Government
- Location
- Atlanta, GA Boston, MA Bridgeport, CT Buffalo, NY Charlotte, NC Chicago, IL Dallas, TX Hartford, CT Houston, TX Los Angeles, CA Miami, FL New Haven, CT New Orleans, LA New York, NY Orlando, FL Phoenix, AZ Pittsburgh, PA Riverside, CA Rochester, NY San Diego, CA San Francisco, CA San Jose, CA Syracuse, NY
I would get rid of the high school completely. Add the major for college.
This could easily take one line, and probably shouldnt have its own section. You could combine this in a skills section
This could be condensed as well. Also, experience should not be a list of duties, you should try and include accomplishments, like "Increased sales X%" or whatever is applicable. Focus on your skills less on your duties. This will make you more appealing to employers.
What is referring to? The foot locker job? If so that is great, but combine this under experience, it does not need its own section.
Delete this. Everyone knows you will provide references.
This is a weird section. You call it special interests but it is a mix. You can delete this section and make room for advertising you skills.
Where are these "strenghts" from? A job? If so, list them under a job, or school? Or what? A lot of these terms are not quantifiable, and shouldnt be up here, like "organizational skills" etc. This can be condensed. You use a lot of fluff in this section and employers may see this transparency. Perhaps focus on more succinctly saying your strengths limiting the fluff?
Make sure your format is standardized with using bold and different font sizes etc. Also, using jan 07 in some places and then 2007 in some places. Use a standard format and this will make your resume look more professional
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