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rwo2103
Job Seeker • 75
Posted 1 November 2007, 01:02 PM

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I am seeking a Recruiting position in the Financial Industry. I admire the bottom-line, fast-paced, and energizing nature of the Financial Industry. I will earn my Masters from Columbia University (in May 2008). I worked in healthcare recruiting for less than five months and was offered two full-time Associate Nurse Recruiter positions. My supervisor deemed my performance “outstanding.” I hit the ground running, mastering recruitment keyword searches, processes, and strategies. My team initiated an innovative Walk-in Interview Center, for which I managed all outreach. When I returned to Columbia this fall, my supervisors hired another two interns to replace me. Sincerely,




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undergrad experience here
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Objective only. I dont think you need the summary as well.
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the bulleting. Make them black dots, something less distracting.
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My only suggestion is slightly more information on relevant coursework. Wonderful resume, you can tell you know what you are doing.
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samb
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4 November 2007, 01:22 PM
Overall, I think you have an excellent resume! I have a few comments for you on your format and summary. 1) From my personal experience as a resume reviewer for a large multi-national company, I do not like a resume objective or resume summary. The whole point of a resume is that it is a summary, and therefore, does not need a separate summary. Your cover letter can explain these items. If you want to have something up top to assist your cover letter, I suggest removing the summary and only keep the objective. It's unconventional to have both, look at other Razume resumes, you'll see. 2) What about a line for undergraduate experience? It can only add to the depth of your resume, as you have the academic experience you need from your masters program. 3) I think the bullets are best filled in black. It's more traditional and makes the format look more professional. Lastly, 4) I would try quantifying your resume more (some examples are highlighted in red). Especially for the financial world, having quantified values in your experience is key. It can be # of people, amount of time, $ amounts, just factual numerical values. Again, overall your resume is great, these are just a few suggestions to make it stand out a little better. Best of luck!

Anonymous
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6 November 2007, 10:08 PM
Looks good, need some tweaks.

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6 November 2007, 10:46 PM
Lots of pins! Check them out.

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6 November 2007, 10:47 PM
Lots of pins! Check them out.

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6 November 2007, 10:48 PM
Lots of pins! Check them out.

Anonymous
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6 November 2007, 10:48 PM
Lots of pins! Check them out.

Anonymous
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7 November 2007, 02:24 AM
I do not believe the summary section is necessary. You have strong work experience but I do not believe it is emphasized by your current format. Any experiences within the world of finance?

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bryce
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27 May 2008, 05:25 PM
Very well organized and descriptive. If I was looking to hire someone in this field, I would most defiantly choose you. Your education is good, not many people I know of have a Masters of Science. The only thing I would say do differently would to put your work history after your summary since you seem to have no employment gaps. Most employers look at that first and then education. Very well done.


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