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- Country
- United States
- Location
- Akron, OH Albany, NY Albuquerque, NM Allentown, PA Atlanta, GA Austin, TX Bakersfield, CA Baltimore, MD Baton Rouge, LA Birmingham, AL Boston, MA Bridgeport, CT Buffalo, NY Charlotte, NC Chicago, IL Cincinnati, OH Cleveland, OH Columbia, SC Columbus, OH Dallas, TX Dayton, OH Denver, CO Detroit, MI El Paso, TX Fresno, CA Grand Rapids, MI Greensboro, NC Hartford, CT Honolulu, HI Houston, TX Indianapolis, IN Jacksonville, FL Kansas City, MO Knoxville, TN Las Vegas, NV Little Rock, AR Los Angeles, CA Louisville, KY Memphis, TN Miami, FL Milwaukee, WI Minneapolis, MN Nashville, TN New Haven, CT New Orleans, LA New York, NY Oklahoma City, OK Omaha, NE Orlando, FL Oxnard, CA Philadelphia, PA Phoenix, AZ Pittsburgh, PA Portland, OR Poughkeepsie, NY Providence, RI Raleigh, NC Richmond, VA Riverside, CA Rochester, NY Sacramento, CA Salt Lake City, UT San Antonio, TX San Diego, CA San Francisco, CA San Jose, CA Sarasota, FL Seattle, WA Springfield, MA St. Louis, MO Syracuse, NY Tampa, FL Toledo, OH Tucson, AZ Tulsa, OK Virginia Beach, VA Washington, DC Wichita, KS Worcester, MA Youngstown, PA
- School
- University of Iowa
- Major
- Accountancy Economics Finance
- Salary Range
- $80-90,000 $90-100,000 $100-125,000 $125-150,000
Excellent bullet points. Depending n the size of the firm, this section will make or break your chances at a larger IBank (I assume its smaller given you have direct contact with he CEO--maybe Im wrong.)
I may have mentioned this to others, but you have to be really careful about listing the dollar amounts of scholarships. Its impressive to have "awarded financial aid package", but its not professional to list $20k--Id take that out.
Also, be careful listing you sat for the exam--a better approach would be to list "passed Level I", may not sounds as impressive, but focuses on actual positive not potential positive.
Comments
Hey everyone, I realize I redacted my website info.
www.joseph-mcspadden.com
Joseph, nice work on updating the website. From what I recall, it's much more professional. I'll have to take a look at your revised resume as well--find comments later on.
Not that your resume was terrible before, but I can see some nice improvements with this draft. You've really polished up the language and structure. I still have a few comments, specifically the bottom section. "Additional Information" is too general, stick to "Skills" or "Awards"...something more specific. Otherwise, looks great!
Sorry, forgot to login for that last review--let me know if you have questions.
What does MBAA stand for? Make it clear. I don't think that GMAT 660 should be mentioned :)