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samb
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Posted 18 October 2007, 12:22 AM

CS Research Position

I am looking for a computer science research position at a major university laboratory.




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the research interest part. Include this in your cover letter
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your dates out to the right
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your position description under the company/org you worked for.
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the boxes around the section headers. it
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the boxes around the section headers. it
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the boxes
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your research interest part
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thank you
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the objactive and summary. put that in a cover letter.
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add bullet points to make it more clear.
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Describe Roles
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You should probably remove this information as well
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Who is Lori?
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You should remove all names from this resume.
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samb
Resume Expert • 875
18 October 2007, 12:36 AM
A few comments. Overall, you have very good experience, but your formatting is very poor. 1) Remove objective, it does not add anything valuable to your resume. 2) Add more spacing between your sections and jobs. 3) Move all dates to the side. You should also move your job tile under the company/org. name (please see a top rated resume format for further clarification). 4) Remove the boxing, it is disruptive to the flow of the resume. Overall well done, just make the formatting better.

Anonymous
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26 October 2007, 12:07 PM
1) Remove objective!

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Anonymous
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18 November 2007, 06:50 PM
Overall, it looks very good. You need to make some improvements to your format.

Anonymous
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9 January 2008, 08:26 PM
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Anonymous
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15 February 2008, 02:39 AM
Remove objective, put research interests at the bottom. Where are the GPAs from your pre-PhD years? Dates should be consistent, don't use seasons and then switch to months. As a PhD, you can have multiple pages for your CV as far as I understand. Use bullet points, not paragraphs.

Anonymous
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19 March 2008, 09:34 AM
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ryangeist
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23 July 2008, 02:24 PM
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ryangeist
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23 July 2008, 02:50 PM
Remove all names from your resume - no one knows who these people are.

ryangeist
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23 July 2008, 02:57 PM
It would be good for you to remove the names from the resume.

fogbound
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11 August 2008, 06:46 PM
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basar
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27 March 2009, 08:36 AM
If I were you, I would lose the objective and research interests lines. These two can go on your cover letter. Instead, here you can include a "Summary" line which will be something like "Computer Science doctoral candidate with research in abc areas, and special research interest in def areas... with XXX years of experience in ghi field... etc."


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