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Shaqneel
Job Seeker • -5
Posted 15 March 2010, 07:25 PM

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Switch the placement and style of your degree name and college name. The degree should be emphasized more.
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This will only make an impact if your potential employer knows what it means. You would be better served by explaining how this relates to the "average" score.
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Indent your bullet points for improved readability.
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Indent your bullet points for improved readability.
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This sounds weird.
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Put the fact that you won first!
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Switch all of your position titles with the company names. Put position titles first in bold, then company names second in italics.
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Maybe re-word this because it may give a prospective employer the impression that you are too committed to this position to leave. Or, if this is a volunteer/part time position, emphasize that so potential employers understand how their company could fit into your life.
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Align this properly.
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Anonymous
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15 March 2010, 09:43 PM
Click "show details" next to the score I have given you to see my suggestions. Good luck!


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