Razume

need more high impact accomplishments, not just your duties, why you leading with education? Resume doesn't give me any indication of what type of work you're interested in, keep soliciting feedback - I'm still updating mine 4 months after my first draft

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Very nice. You are seeking a career in event planning. How about making a section for your event planning experience then? Communication experience is generally ok title. But you have solid event planning experience listed there - so why not use a title fit for the job applied?