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unimpressive. remove.
These last three could arguably be put into a seperate section, as they arent directly related to your education
Try to keep bullets to 1 line
not sure what these are, but could make the whole thing cluttered
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Yeah, it's a pretty sweet resume. Would be much better however, if instead of Camelot pictures, it was Camelot strip club on M street. Maybe next time, you'll get that job instead--but keep reaching for the stars!
Yeah it's pretty good. But don't think you're smarter than me because you have Japanese characters on your resume.
All and all the Vector marketing is your most impressive work. I think you should play up your Vector experience and make sure they know your ability to sell ice to eskimos.
yeaah
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lame