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- Country
- United States
- Location
- Minneapolis, MN
- Major
- International Business
- Groups
- Delta Sigma Pi GW
- Salary Range
- $80-90,000
Should read: "I am passionate about leadership and the professional development of others."
It is unclear what this bullet means. Are you currently leading this mentoring committee? If so, "lead" is the right word. If this was in the past, use "led".
I like the concept of the two major headings and their sub-bullets, but the sub-bullets are unclear. They should be consistent - try making each bullet start with a past tense or present tense verb.
efficiencies is mispelled.
Awkward and very long sentence.
Good job with your consistency in listing your job responsibilities and then key contributions and results. it looks good.
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Thanks for your feedback! I plan to make all the changes you suggested