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hyl2007
Job Seeker • 95
Posted 11 May 2008, 03:38 AM

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Career Field
Marketing
Location
Undecided


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Consider moving your dates to the left. Also, be sure to widen the margins on your page. Although its a minor change, it will make you look more accomplished.
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What is Academy Experience? Its not clear, so consider changing the title or incorporating this into "Work Experience".
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Change this title to "Work Experience".
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Make sure to put a range of dates for your academics, its not clear if you started or graduated in 03.
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Now that youve graduated, you should move education below work experience. Your work history will get you the job youre looking for, education will only supplement that effort at this stage.
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Impressive language skills, nice work!
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Try adding more applications here, maybe something specific to marketing?
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Overall, you need to restructure your resume. In this order include the following sections: Work Experience, Education, Skills.
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You have too many bullet points and not enough detail on each point. Focus on using numerical values for your bullet points. Focus on achievement oriented bullet points.
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samb
Resume Expert • 870
12 May 2008, 06:54 PM
Hyl2007, I think your resume could use some work, but you have the basic building blacks in place. Your current resume over emphasizes your dates and under emphasizes your content, specifically you recent work history. See my comments on top of your resume. Consider using a different format/layout. Take a look at some top rated marketing resumes for examples. Best of luck.


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