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DJS
Job Seeker • 165
Posted 10 May 2008, 02:25 AM

Sales Resume


Career Field
Undecided
Location
San Diego, CA
School
University of Oregon
Major
Undecided


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You graduated in 2005, its time to move your education section below. The valuable real estate on top should be reserved for your most recent experience.
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I very much like how youve quantified your experience here. Focus on numerical values and sales achievements.
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You need to expand this section. Have more bullet points here than any other position. Not all positions are equal, you want to show progress from the bottom to top.
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Consider moving your locations below your dates. It will look cleaner.
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I like the awards, nice work!
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samb
Resume Expert • 870
12 May 2008, 06:19 PM
I like the overall presentation and format, but I think the language can be improved. More specifically, the bullet items for the most recent position should over-power the other positions. Build your resume like an upside down pyramid, where the emphasis is placed on the most recent achievements. I like the use of numerical values to show experience. See other comments. Best of luck.


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