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rbm921
Job Seeker • 10

6 August 2010, 05:45 PM

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Nice, clean-looking resume, although you do have some weird formatting issues in the "Account Executive" section. Your first two subheads start out "Responsible for..." Use verbs to lead off like you do in the other subheads ("Exceeded", "Built", "Designed", etc). Also, your resume would have more impact if you included a little more quantitative information, i.e., how much % you exceeded goals, resume stream, etc. Nice resume. Best of luck to you.

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tdkauffman

Job Seeker • -5

Posted 27 October 2009, 01:29 AM

Results-Driven Recruiter and Human Resources Professional

A position in recruitment, and or human resource management.

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martia

Job Seeker • 10

31 October 2009, 10:18 AM

Make the first word in each bullet point an action. "Responsible for" doesn't tell me what you did. Rephrase to give impact to company: "Expanded company's client roster thru business development and marketing activities." Instead of "Provided consultation" use "Consulted".

rbm921

Job Seeker • 10

6 August 2010, 05:45 PM

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Nice, clean-looking resume, although you do have some weird formatting issues in the "Account Executive" section. Your first two subheads start out "Responsible for..." Use verbs to lead off like you do in the other subheads ("Exceeded", "Built", "Designed", etc). Also, your resume would have more impact if you included a little more quantitative information, i.e., how much % you exceeded goals, resume stream, etc. Nice resume. Best of luck to you.

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