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WindyCity
Job Seeker • 95
Posted 23 April 2008, 10:00 AM

Searching for a Job is a Full Time Job

I have done some work to this resume but have a lot more to go- I would appreciate any helpful comments that would get me to where I eventually want to be. (Which is in a more investment-heavy, investment banking, corporate finance or analytical atmosphere that uses my Econ degree. I also wouldn't mind getting into a consulting role.)




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For you skills section, focus on hard skills and computer apps specific to finance. See my resume for an example.
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Now that youve graduated, your work experience should be on top.
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Not bad bullet structure. I like how well quantified your language is. Focus on keeping bullets to one sentence each.
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I think you can add more detail to this title, it looks unimpressive. What type of intern were you? List "Professional Sales Intern" or something that makes you sound more impressive. Brand yourself as youd like recruiters to see you.
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Specifically for investment banking, I think you need to gain more experience in the financial world before getting your foot in the door at a bank.
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Big4
Resume Expert • 2855
25 April 2008, 08:50 AM
WindyCity, I think you have a good start, but you're right a number of improvements can be made. On the overall structure, you should consider moving education below work history, now that you've graduated. Also, make sure to add a skills section. Especially for finance/investment banking, a skills section in key. See my other comments, best of luck and be sure to share your knowledge by reviewing a few other resumes on Razume.


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