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Jdolfin24
Job Seeker • 85
Posted 20 April 2008, 09:58 PM

Summer Job Resume

This is my first resume without all of my high school accomplishments.


Career Field
Undecided
Location
Boston, MA
School
Cornell University
Major
Engineering
Groups
Other
Salary Range
$20-25,000


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Work Experience
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Capitalize Summer to make consistant with other listings.
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Im not familiar with Outward Bound, but it seems like a great experience that you can talk about in an interview. Look for opportunities related to this that involve teamwork, leadership, and overcoming challenges.
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Your just listing a bunch of positions instead of giving me a few key ones and telling me what you did and why it was important. From this, I can only determine that youve had a lot of jobs that you probably showed up for. What were your accomplishments? Take a look at a couple of top resumes on here to get a feel for how to present this information.
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How has your leadership made an impact on these organizations? What did you bring to the table that led to getting stuff accomplished?
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I have no idea what this is... a more detailed description would help.
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Great school and a great GPA. Keep up the good work!
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Deans List? Awards?
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Can you give more detailed descriptions about your experiences?
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Amazing
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ruthlessgravity
Resume Expert • 1355
21 April 2008, 09:25 AM
Your NSF experience is going to be your key selling point in interviews. You have the basics of what is shaping up to be a great resume. I recommend taking a look at a few top resumes on here to get a feel for how to present some of this information. I would also drop a few of the less important jobs you've held and focus on your accomplishments related to your particular field. Best of luck!

Anonymous
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22 April 2008, 02:23 PM
I agree, I would not hesitate to make this more than one page with the amount of experience that you have. I would also take off anything high-school related if possible. Leave on stuff that is only applicable to the job. Talk most about your academic and work experiences that are professional. I would leave out or change work experiences in order to apply to the position or show a leadership role.

lewisjohn
Job Seeker • 150
1 May 2008, 12:21 AM
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Anonymous
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12 May 2008, 01:18 PM
keep up the good work!

Anonymous
Unknown • ?
12 May 2008, 01:21 PM
Dear Summer Job Resume, I want to tell you a story. Before you overlook this comment just hear me out. I've been in school for a very long time now and I've reazlised that all of this sucks. This one time I was at Taco Bell [not that I work there or anything] and I ordered a taco salad. [Which are really good]. He started making it and then handed it to me. I walked to my car, got in, and looked at his acomplishment. HE FORGOT HALF OF THE SALAD. I walked back in and asked them to remake it, [only because it looks nasty] and his response was, "Uh. Oh Yeah, I forgot to finnish making it." Not much of anything to say butI just thought I would tell you.


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