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I have no idea what position you are applying for... try adding an objective to let employers know your job focus and if you are interested in part time or full time. I like the format, it looks very clear with the bullet points. Don't forget to add on two character or work references. If you need to cut it down so that it fits on one page after adding the above, i would suggest cutting out a few sentences from the pizza jobs depending on what job you are applying for (management vs. finance) Good luck!
What exactly are you suggesting I add, and what to remove? Thanks for your insight
It seems like you look fit to work as a restuarant manager or something related to customer service. I prefer seeing related experience first. A professional summary is preferred. An objective is okay but not suggested if you apply directly for a specific position.