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Remove. Objectives dont need to be on resumes anymore and this one makes you sound like your looking for a job doing anti-competitive activities.
Nice, but add a little more detail. Why did yoy do these things? What was the result? Did the website increase sales or profits for the business? If so, how much?
The way this is listed, its obvious that your utilizing this to take up space.
align dates
Any activities? Deans List? etc?
Make this a new line. Its not grammatically correct the way it is listed now.
What are some of your results from starting this business? Did you achieve $xxx amount of sales. Business Analyst are concerned about how decisions effect performance. Here is your chance to shine by showing that you ran a business and how your decisions led to sales growth, etc.
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Not bad, see the balloons for comments. Best of Luck.
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