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butters149
Job Seeker • 55
Posted 1 April 2008, 02:25 AM

Econ Resume Draft 2

Here is my 2nd draft after taking it to my career center and adding a few more stuff to it. I am interested in the Business Analyst career so that is what my resume is geared for.


Career Field
Other
Location
Los Angeles, CA
School
University of California-Riverside
Major
Economics
Salary Range
$45-50,000


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Remove. Objectives dont need to be on resumes anymore and this one makes you sound like your looking for a job doing anti-competitive activities.
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Nice, but add a little more detail. Why did yoy do these things? What was the result? Did the website increase sales or profits for the business? If so, how much?
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The way this is listed, its obvious that your utilizing this to take up space.
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align dates
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Any activities? Deans List? etc?
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Make this a new line. Its not grammatically correct the way it is listed now.
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What are some of your results from starting this business? Did you achieve $xxx amount of sales. Business Analyst are concerned about how decisions effect performance. Here is your chance to shine by showing that you ran a business and how your decisions led to sales growth, etc.
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ruthlessgravity
Resume Expert • 1355
1 April 2008, 08:32 AM
Not bad, see the balloons for comments. Best of Luck.

bryce
Job Seeker • 175
27 May 2008, 05:51 PM
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