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- Career Field
- Information Technology Technology
- Location
- Chicago, IL New York, NY
- Major
- Physics
- Salary Range
- $60-65,000 $65-70,000 $70-80,000
My major issues are will your format and section names. Consider widening the margins to the left to better fill your page. Also consider changing "Professional" to "Work Experience".
Very impressive GPA from a solid school.
Expected graduation date need to be added, as you mentioned.
As I mentioned, fill out this section with more detail. You should build your "Work Experience" like an upside down pyramid. More bullet points for the top items and less going down. That shows progress towards a career goal.
I like how you quantified your language here, do that more often, you will get good results/feedback from recruiters.
Impressive skillset. Consider moving to the bottom.
Try using traditional round/black bullets. dashes look less professional.
Flush your margin left and move your section headers on top rather than to the left. Filling your page will make you look much more professional at first glance.
Comments
Oops... I forgot to put my expected graduation date.
Jason, overall you have a very strong resumes. Your content is very impressive, however, consider positing a comment at the bottom to clarify your career goals. That way the community can better valuate your resume relative to your future plans. If you are venturing into the IT side of the financial world, I believe you are well situated. Morgan Stanley experience is very impressive, but you should consider adding more detail to that top level work experience item. See my comments on your resume, but I believe you require only formatting/language changes. Additionally, thanks for your great review on another resume. After more reviews and building your karma balance, you will gain respect as a knowledgeable member on Razume.